I have revised the paper entitled ‘Progressive groundwater decoupling may drive a shift toward shallower and faster terrestrial water cycling’. The paper is well-structured, scientifically sound, and can be published in the Hydrology and Earth System Science journal after some revisions. These can be itemized as follows. Best regards.

-    There is a significant portion of the literature that may be useful to cite in the work. The Authors wisely underline key issues, like the fact that groundwater regulates surface fluxes IF it acts as long term reservoir. But the roots of these reasonings are deeper than data-driven studies (Condon et al., 2020; Miguel-Macho and Fan, 2025) and needs to be framed. In this context, the works of Berkowitz and Zehe (2020) and Schiavo et al. (2022) are milestones in reshaping the mutual role of surface and groundwater, being mutually feeding and more similar than we think. Berkowitz and Zehe (2020) assessed the similar nature of the two ‘water worlds’, while Schiavo et al. (2022) were the first to implement gravity-driven behaviors in groundwater networks to highlight the similar self-organized structure of groundwater flow patterns. These two works were important in closing the ties between these two worlds.

-    Recent works have highlighted the water-limited nature of mountain aquifers. This has been clearly stated by Betterle and Belling (2024) for headwater catchments, whose discharge patterns. This is due to the geomorphological forcing being the main responsible for drainage patterns in prealpine and alpine environments. Moreover, they also have assessed the same three zones of different groundwater dynamics behaviors. I suggest incorporating these references as well to better frame the present conceptualization, also offered in Figure 1, in the recent literature.

-    I am a bit skeptical about the deterministic values fixed as parameters in lines 100-111. Can the authors justify this choice and explain why they did not go for intervals of confidence for these parameters? The whole Section 2 should be sustained in the light of this comment.

-    At lines 142-145, the Authors say they reduced the topographic gradient as lateral subsurface drainage control. Why did they do that? Is that consistent with local geological, hydrogeological, and flow patterns features? Saying this, they basically say the local flow patterns (lateral subsurface drainage) are being altered. This should be strongly supported. Moreover, wouldn’t these lateral drainage patterns change on a monthly basis rather than being just flattened a priori?

-    Figure 6 is not clear to me. What is there on the y-axis? Could the authors find a better way to show it? Which core info do they want to share with this Figure?

-    When introducing the parflow model, such as the surface flow model and subsurface unsaturated flow model, the Authors should introduce a small section with fundamental governing equations.

References:

Berkowitz, B. and Zehe, E.: Surface water and groundwater: unifying conceptualization and quantification of the two “water worlds”, Hydrol. Earth Syst. Sci., 24, 1831–1858, https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-24-1831-2020, 2020.

Betterle, A., & Bellin, A. (2024). Morphological and Hydrogeological Controls of Groundwater Flows and Water Age Distribution in Mountain Aquifers and Streams. Water Resources Research, 60(11), e2024WR037407. https://doi.org/10.1029/2024WR037407

Schiavo, M., Riva, M., Guadagnini, L., Zehe, E., & Guadagnini, A. (2022). Probabilistic identification of Preferential Groundwater Networks. Journal of Hydrology, 610, 127906. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jhydrol.2022.127906

Review for “Progressive groundwater decoupling may drive a shift toward shallower and faster terrestrial water cycling” by Sun et al., for consideration in HESS.

This is an interesting study that is nicely organized and concisely presented. I believe it fits the scope of HESS and will be fit for publication after some clarifications and revisions. I have listed general and specific comments below that I hope will strengthen the paper.

General Comments:

1. The introduction relies heavily on two studies— one of which focuses on a snow-dominated mountain catchment. It should be noted that mountain sites like East River can have many streamflow generation processes and are shaped by other influences that are not discussed (e.g., snow, steep topography, shallow soils, mountain-block recharge, etc.—see Jencso et al., 2009; Somers and McKenzie, 2020) and may not be relevant elsewhere. How do these characteristics factor into the proposed shift toward shallower water cycling? Are there landscapes in which this shift would be unlikely to occur? If so, I would suggest to be more explicit in the scope of where this work is applicable.

• References:
• Jencso, K. G., et al. (2009). "Hydrologic connectivity between landscapes and streams: Transferring reach- and plot-scale understanding to the catchment scale." Water Resources Research 45(4).
• Somers, L. D. and J. M. McKenzie (2020). "A review of groundwater in high mountain environments." WIREs Water 7(6).

2. The term “reorganization pathway” is used several times but is not very clear, please define with first use. Does this suggest that under dry conditions, when the water table has receded to some critical point, a preferential pathway for young/local water emerges? 

3. I would suggest to briefly summarize the main message from each figure into its respective caption to help direct the reader’s attention.

4. How would the findings from this study be extrapolated to real-world conditions (e.g., more heterogeneity in hillslope parameters)? I see that expanding to real study sites is potential future work, but some discussion of study limitations would be helpful to ground the broader applicability of this work’s conclusions.

Specific Comments:

Line 41: Suggest to revise the following to be more precise: “…as shallow soil moisture is depleted, “relative” groundwater contributions increase…”.

Line 66: Suggest to revise wording: I would not say the expectation is “strengthened” groundwater buffering under intensifying drought, rather more of a shift toward reliance on groundwater stores in the absence of input precipitation. The wording used later “intensifying groundwater dependence” seems more accurate to me.

Figure 1: Should the “local” water still be connected to the stream in panel b to show how the shallow flow paths dominate the water contributions?

Lines 107-111: Are there references to support these specific parameter values?

Line 112: It would be helpful to include the key governing equations for the ParFlow and EcoSLIM models.

Line 115: I realize that the aim is not to represent a specific field site, but Oklahoma is a fairly large and climatologically diverse state. Can you be more specific about where in Oklahoma the meteorological record is from?

Line 134: What LAI values were used in the baseline configuration? Perhaps a table in SI summarizing the key parameters for the baseline and additional scenarios would be helpful to include. I wonder also whether the perturbation scenarios are realistic for the “semi-arid woody hillslope” being represented in the baseline case? Is the “greening” scenario due to CO2 fertilization or some other driver? The relevance of these additional scenarios would benefit from more explanation and literature support.

Figures 2 & 3: What is the variation associated with the monthly values? If the model was run for 20 years at an hourly timestep, I assume the monthly values shown are averages.

Figure 3: Why are there no points in September for the non-baseline scenarios? And no point in August for the red line scenario (Temperature+1K MaxLAI+50%)?

Figures 4 and 5: It is a bit confusing to have the “x” direction of the hillslope on the vertical axis of the plots. It may also help to add a small panel with the hillslope configuration for visual context (e.g., as in Figure S3).

Line 244: Does the “lower 20m” refer to the “x” direction of the hillslope? (A visual representation of this would be helpful to avoid confusion).

Line 247: I believe this is the first use of “age gap”—can this be defined explicitly here?

Figure 6: It is difficult to see the differences between scenarios in this figure. Would it be helpful to overlay the months for different scenarios or add some guiding labels/annotations to highlight what the main message of the figure is? (Summarizing the main message in the caption as suggested above would be helpful, as well).

Figure 7: Similar to the comment about Figures 4 and 5, it is confusing to have the “x” direction of the hillslope represented on the vertical axis of the right panels, but then on the horizontal axis of the left panels. It would also help to add some description for the blue rectangles in the x vs. ET age panels in the caption.

Line 337-339: This statement needs stronger support—what is the evidence that old water in streams is sourced from deeper soil moisture as opposed to groundwater? (And how is “deep soil moisture” defined here?)

Line 339-341: Suggest to revise wording: As with previous comments (lines 41, 66), I think it would be more accurate to say that there is a greater reliance/dependence on groundwater under increasing stress (at least following the typical conceptualization), rather than becoming “more engaged”.