Review of ‘Response of water temperatures and stratification to changing climate in three lakes with different morphometry’ by Magee and Wu
General comments
This is a well written paper describing an interesting topic in climatology and limnology: ‘How has lake temperature and stratification responded to a changing climate, and how can we expect these responses to differ among lakes’. Magee and Wu use an exceptional dataset of >100 years and focus on the effects of changing air temperature and wind speed on water temperature and stratification patterns in three lakes situated near Madison, Wisconsin (US), which are characterized by different morphometric features. Similar results have been presented in the literature for lakes elsewhere (see specific details below), but the strengths of this paper is the across-lake comparison and the use of a one-dimensional lake model to disentangle the different factors which contribute to a lakes response to climate change. The authors use the one-dimensional lake model (DYRESM-WQ), which has been used frequently by the limnological community during the past 20 or so years. I must admit, I am not a fan of using models that are not openly available (this is my understanding of DYRESM), especially as many other one-dimensional lake temperature models are openly available to the community. For example, the General Lake Model (GLM), Freshwater Lake model (FLake), and MyLake all have similar capabilities to DYRESM but are open-access. If my understanding is incorrect and DYRESM is openly available, please state this in the methods. The authors use DYRESM to reconstruct the thermal and stratification regime of the lakes during the last century and for sensitivity studies exploring the lake responses to changes in mean annual air temperature and wind speed.
I found the aim of this paper clearly described, the results very convincing and presented in a reasonable manner, and I think the paper will be well received by the limnological community. Specifically, this paper investigates what, in my opinion, is currently lacking in the scientific literature. Specifically, many of the previous studies that have examined the response of lake surface water temperature to climate change have focused on the past few decades. Thus, having a study focusing on lake temperature responses from the start of the 20th century is an important contribution. I do believe this is an important topic, and one that deserves some attention - particularly given the recent emphasis on the rapid warming of lakes from around the world, and the numerous ecological and socioeconomic consequences of increase lake surface water temperature, in addition to their interactions within the climate system.
Overall, I think this paper is well written, the data is well chosen and the analysis is reasonable. I can see this paper being a benchmark for future studies and an important contribution to the literature. I think there is great potential for this paper to be valuable to the community.
Specific Comments
Introduction
In general, the introduction is well written. However, the literature review seems rather limited and many of the recent studies covering this topic have been overlooked. For example, see the O’Reilly et al. (2015) paper and references therein for an update of some recent paper in this topic. Also, in the opening paragraph, the authors refer to decreasing wind speeds but not referred to some of the important papers in this topic, such as Vautard et al. (2010) who demonstrated that wind speeds globally have been decreasing. In addition, of great relevance to the current study is the paper by Woolway et al. (2017a) who followed a very similar approach to that described in this paper when reconstructing the thermal dynamics of Vortsjarv (Estonia) - they also investigated the response of lake temperature dynamics to changes in air temperature and wind speed.
P2L15 - Lake water temperature is closely related to the… Equally important is humidity, cloud cover, solar radiation - in particular the surface energy fluxes. For example, the study of Schmid and Köster (2016) demonstrated that 60% of lake surface water temperature warming in Lake Zurich was caused by air temperature and 40% by increased solar radiation. Also, a paper by Wilhelm et al. (2006) demonstrated that daily extreme water temperatures (although they used the equilibrium temperature) responded to shifts in air temperature, wind speed, relative humidity, and cloud cover. Thus, one could argue that to understand fully how lake surface water temperatures will respond to climate change, one would require each of these variables to be included. This has been shown to be important for some lakes (Schmid and Köster 2016). I realize that the authors have likely considered all of the points I’ve raised here, but I think they should be mentioned in the paper.
Also, important is local features. For example, the study Tanentzap et al. (2008) showed that some lakes might cool as air temperatures increase, as a response of the complicated interactions between lakes and their environment and/or internal processes.
…found that decreasing wind speeds resulted in increased stratification… - This is a great example of the Woolway et al. (2017a) study.
In terms of the influence of lake surface area altering the response of lakes to atmospheric forcing, I think more context is needed here. Specifically, numerous papers have demonstrated the importance of lake size, some of which you already cited. Some examples:
• Winslow et al. (2015), which you cite, demonstrated that small lakes demonstrate a muted response of deep water temperature to climate change.
• Read et al. (2012) demonstrated that lake size influences the relative contribution of wind and convective mixing to the gas transfer coefficient in lakes.
• Woolway et al. (2016) demonstrated that lake size can influence the magnitude of diurnal heating and cooling in lakes which has important consequences for gas transfer (Holgerson et al. 2017).
• Torbick et al. (2016) demonstrates that smaller lakes in northeast United States have been warming more rapidly than larger lakes in terms of surface water temperature.
Note I only list a few above but there are many others, which I trust the authors to find.
Methods
Is DYRESM-WQ open-access? If so, I think details of where the reader can find the source code would be useful. Similar to GLM (General Lake Model), which is openly available, I would hope DYRESM-WQ is available to the community, as all results should be reproducible by the reader.
I would show the light attenuation coefficient as Kd (not k), as it is commonly referred in the limnological community.
Discussion
This paper has some similarities with a paper very recently published in Climatic Change by Woolway et al. (2017b). In particular, they also analyze a > 100 year lake temperature time series from two lakes in Austria (Mondsee and Worthersee), and investigate how 20 lakes with >50 years of observations have responded to climatic warming. I would strongly encourage the authors to discuss these results and compare to their findings. In addition, how do the abrupt shifts, which you discuss (evaluated via the Rodionov method), compare with Woolway et al. (2017b)?
Figures and Tables
Figure 1: Can the authors add a local map to illustrate how close these lakes are to one-another? I know this is mentioned in the text, but including a map would be useful. Also, it is rather difficult to see some of the contour values. If the contours can be re-drawn in grey, that would make the writing more understandable - or potentially redraw these as colour plot, if you are generating figures in colour.
Figure 2. Interestingly, the step in annual air temperature seems to occur at the same time as reported by Woolway et al. (2017b) for Central Europe, a result of a global shift perhaps? Also, the wind speed change in ~1995 is consistent with the results of Woolway et al. (2017a) for Estonia, although they do not report on the exact year, but a shift can be seen from their figures.
References:
Bichet A, Wild M, Folini S, Schär C (2012) Causes for decadal variations of wind speed over land: Sensitivity studies with a global climate model. Geophys Res Lett 39(11). doi:10.1029/2012GL051685.
Holgerson M, Farr E, Raymond P (2017) Gas transfer velocities in small forested ponds. J. Geophys Res. doi: 10.1002/2016JG003734
O’Reilly et al. (2015) Rapid and highly variable warming of lake surface waters around the world. Geophy Res Lett 42, 10773-10781.
Schmid M, Köster O (2016) Excess warming of a Central European lake by solar brightening. Water Resour Res 52:8103-8116. doi:10.1002/2016WR018651
Tanentzap AJ, et al. (2008) Cooling lakes while the world warms: Effects of forest regrowth and increased dissolved organic matter on the thermal regime of a temperate, urban lake. Limnol Oceanogr 53:404-410.
Torbick et al. (2016) demonstrates that smaller lakes in northeast United States have been warming more rapidly than larger lakes in terms of surface water temperature.
Vautard R, Cattiaux J, Yiou P, Thepaut J, Ciais P (2010) Northern Hemisphere atmospheric stilling partly attributed to an increase in surface roughness. Nature Geo Sci 3:756-761.
Wilhelm S, Hintze T, Livingstone DM, Adrian R (2006) Long-term response of daily epilimnetic temperature extrema to climate forcing. Can J Fish Aquat Sci 63:2467-2477.
Woolway, R.I., Jones, I.D., Maberly, S.C. et al. (2016). Diel surface temperature range scales with lake size. PLoS One 11(3): e0152466. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0152466
Woolway, R.I., Meinson, P., Nõges, P., Jones, I. D., Laas, A. (2017a). Atmospheric stilling leads to prolonged thermal stratification in a large shallow polymictic lake. Climatic Change. doi:10.1007/s10584-017-1909-0
Woolway, R.I., Dokulil, M., Marszelewski, W., Schmid, M., Bouffard, D., Merchant, C.J. (2017b). Warming of Central European lakes and their response to the 1980s climate regime shift. Climatic Change. doi:10.1007/s10584-017-1966-4 |