Articles | Volume 29, issue 20
https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-29-5283-2025
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Quantifying matrix diffusion effect on solute transport in subsurface fractured media
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (19 Jul 2025) by Heng Dai
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AR by Hui Wu on behalf of the Authors (13 Sep 2025)
The manuscript addresses a relevant and interesting question about the role of solute diffusion into the rock matrix during fracture flow. In this work, the authors present a "unified" parameter to assess the relevance of matrix diffusion and a correction term to the analytical solution of solute transport in a single fracture that mimics the effect of matrix diffusion without the need to explicitly model matrix diffusion, thus reducing the computational burden.
I have several comments to improve the manuscript:
1) The manuscript remains descriptive in several places where quantitative limits and criteria would benefit the text. These include:
* l131: "shows extremely small concentrations". I believe values would give the reader a better understanding.
* l132: "R is approaching a maximum value". What specific value? The definition of R does not seem to approach an analytical limit, since the value depends on the number of data points (see comment below).
* l145: "an almost linear relationship". Can a R^2 or any other fit quality parameter be provided to assess the quality of the linear fit? Is there any systematic deviation from the linear trend?
* l171: "shows the largest correlation coefficient". I believe providing Pearson correlation coefficients explicitly in the text would benefit the readers ability to form their own opinion.
* l184: "has a negligible effect". What do the authors consider negligible? Is it possible to give a quantitative limit.
* l261: "gives the best result". How was this concluded? Can you provide a quantitative measure from which this statement can be understood?
* l353: "remains a reasonable criterion". Similar to above: What quantitative measure was used to make this determination?
2) The theoretical basis of the paper is sometimes unclear to me, partly because of potentially imprecise formulations
* l37: "the underlying uncertainties". Uncertainties about what? Which relevant parameters are considered uncertain in which situation and to what degree?
* Eq. 2: I think the derivation should be in terms of z, not x in the diffusion part, to be consistent with the original sources, such as Graf & Simmons (2009). If the authors derive from the original source, this needs considerable attention and explanation.
* Eq. 4: The symbol \xi is missing an explanation * l113f: The order for C_f and C_mf should be "fracture-only and fracture-matrix coupled models, respectively", I guess.
* Eq. 6: The definition of R in its discrete form is irritating for me. Should it not follow an integral form related to a tracer recovery form or similar? In its current form, R seems to depend on the number of data points chosen in the breakthrough curves (BTCs), which could be an arbitrary number or at least depends on the spatial discretization, and makes comparison between BTCs difficult, as I assume the same N must be used. I think this has a major impact on the analysis presented here. The chosen form, if it remains in the revision, should be justified and critically discussed to improve the readers understanding of this result.
* Table 1: The given values are not justified. Why were these values chosen? What kind of host rock/fracture system and application do the authors have in mind for their analysis?
* Section 2.2: Why do the authors focus on the linear part of the relationships? Isn't the nonlinear part the much more interesting relationship?
* l175: The proposed unified parameter is never derived or motivated. Its physical interpretation is not given. This makes it very difficult for the reader to assess its full potential as the parameter seems rather arbitrary in its present form. How did the authors arrive at this parameter? Especially with the results in l194 and l220f, an interpretation of the unified parameter would be very helpful for the reader.
* Section 3: The numerical model lacks a detailed methodological description. What equations have been solved? With which software? Has the code been benchmarked? Initial conditions? Boundary conditions? Compared to other models? ...
* l265: "the fracture-only model overestimates solute transport". What is the result for the unified parameter derived earlier? Does this parameter also indicate that matrix diffusion is relevant?
3) The structure of the manuscript needs to be improved.
* The introduction could more clearly state the computational burden. Currently it only seems to be an additional parameter to be guessed with a simple diffusion equation, which seems not very computationally cumbersome these days. Especially as the authors focus on a solution for a single fracture and not fracture networks.
* l67: smaller apertures lead to higher flow velocities. Hence, it remains unclear how "smaller fracture apertures and flow velocities" should result in the same effect regarding matrix diffusion.
* l86: The introduction would benefit from a concise discussion of the other five unified and dimensionless parameters from literature, their underlying assumptions and derivations.
* Fig4: Based on the occurrence in the text, the placement and order of Figs 4 & 5 should be reconsidered.
* Section 4.1 reads very much like a repetition from the introduction and a summary of previous results but does not present a critical discussion of the obtained results.
* Sections 4.3 and 4.4 seem to be rather results than a discussion.
* A critical discussion of the results, especially adressing limitations of the unified number and the correction term are needed to provide the reader with a critical assessment of the acomplishments achieved by the authors.
4) The data availability statement seems incomplete and partly imprecise.
Which BTCs are calculated with analytical solutions? I assume section 3 is not based on analytical solutions but computer models/codes are not mentioned in the statement. It should be more clearly stated that the field and lab data is a summary of literature results to avoid confusion.