Articles | Volume 29, issue 14
https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-29-3359-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Evaluation of globally gridded precipitation data and satellite-based terrestrial water storage products using hydrological drought recovery time
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- Final revised paper (published on 30 Jul 2025)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-2616', Anonymous Referee #1, 24 Oct 2024
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', E. Sinem Ince, 13 Nov 2024
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- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', E. Sinem Ince, 13 Nov 2024
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ED: Publish subject to revisions (further review by editor and referees) (27 Nov 2024) by Alexander Gruber
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (04 Dec 2024) by Alexander Gruber
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ED: Publish subject to revisions (further review by editor and referees) (15 Jan 2025) by Alexander Gruber
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (04 Mar 2025) by Alexander Gruber
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (22 Apr 2025) by Alexander Gruber
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ED: Publish as is (09 May 2025) by Alexander Gruber
AR by E. Sinem Ince on behalf of the Authors (12 May 2025)
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1. Overview
The article proposes using Terrestrial Water Storage Anomalies (TWSA) from GRACE missions to independently evaluate precipitation products, specifically GPCC and GPCP, since traditional methods rely on gauge data used in the products' creation. By calculating Drought Recovery Times (DRT) with TWSA alone and combined with precipitation data, the authors aim to provide a more robust assessment of the alignment between precipitation products and TWSA.
2. Major comments
Throughout the article, I encountered many interesting results, but the core scientific analysis was lacking. It was unclear what these findings reveal, how they answer the research question, or how the new method clarifies the strengths and weaknesses of the precipitation products. Specifically, there is no discussion of contexts in which one product outperforms the other, nor an exploration of why this might be.
Additionally, the research question itself is not well-defined. While the abstract claims the goal is to evaluate precipitation products using TWSA data to calculate DRT, the paper sometimes shifts focus to evaluating TWSA products or comparing which precipitation/TWSA combination best estimates DRT.
To address this, I recommend: 1) clearly defining the research question in the introduction and maintaining alignment throughout, and 2) adding a discussion section (included in or separate from the " results " section) to interpret the results in light of the research question.
3. Minor comments
Abstract: Consider simplifying the abstract by emphasizing the key findings, rather than delving into specific details. This will help focus the reader's attention on the main outcomes without overwhelming them with too much information.
Line 28: You present the consistency results without explaining what they entail. Providing context here will help the reader understand the significance of these results.
Line 178: The detrending process would benefit from more explanation. Please consider adding details on the method used, along with a relevant reference.
Line 287: You describe the correlations over Australia (0.55), South America (0.46), and South Africa (ρ > 0.47) as “high.” Please clarify the criteria or thresholds you used to define these correlations as high.
Line 298: The text references Figures 2c and 2d, but these should be Figures 2b and 2d. Please adjust for accuracy.