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https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-2024-302
https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-2024-302
19 Nov 2024
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Tracking phosphorus dynamics: Historical and future trends in eight Lake Erie tributaries

Jiaxin Wang, Zhiming Qi, and Tiequan Zhang

Abstract. Phosphorus (P) pollution in Lake Erie has been a growing concern, yet a comprehensive understanding of long-term P loss patterns is still lacking. We analyzed annual, monthly, and extreme daily P loss trends from 1974 to 2021 across eight major P-contributing tributaries using Seasonal Trend Decomposition with Loess (STL) and Generalized Extreme Value (GEV) models, and projected P loads through 2040 using machine learning (Bagging). Our results indicate no clear reduction in P loading from these tributaries over the past 47 years. Since the late 1980s, soluble reactive P (SRP) loads in the Sandusky and Maumee Rivers have increased from 0.12 and 0.67 tons day-1 to 0.41 and 1.55 tons day-1, respectively, with an increasing trend observed between January and June. We found that molar total nitrogen (N) to total P (TP) ratios in most tributaries, except for the Portage River, were generally 2–3 times higher than in the 1970s. Despite increased annual P loads, our analysis indicates a decline trend in daily P loads in the Maumee River during extreme flow events, except at the 2-year flow level, where daily TP tended to increase from 1.4 to 1.7 tons day-1 and SRP tended to increase from 0.2 to 0.3 tons day-1. Our future projections suggest that tributary P loads will continue to exceed target thresholds. In conclusion, this study addresses knowledge gaps in understanding long-term P dynamics in Lake Erie and highlights the need for more site-specific research to safeguard its water quality.

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Jiaxin Wang, Zhiming Qi, and Tiequan Zhang

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  • RC1: 'Comment on hess-2024-302', Anonymous Referee #1, 17 Dec 2024
  • RC2: 'Comment on hess-2024-302', Anonymous Referee #2, 24 Feb 2025
  • Research Questions and Justification:
    • What are the authors' expectations for the observed trends?
    • Why was the time span of 1974–2001 selected? There are mentions of changes in trends after 1990, but no explanation is provided. What significant changes occurred around 1990 that might explain these trends?
    • Why were these specific rivers chosen? What is their significance to the lake’s nutrient budget? What proportion of the total watershed do they drain?
  • Analysis of Concentrations vs. Loads:
    • The study focuses on river flow, TP, SRP, TSS, and TN loads but does not analyze concentrations. Concentration data is essential for understanding loading dynamics both in the present and future. Without it, the interpretation of trends is incomplete.

     

     

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    Line 90: The main objective of the study should be explicitly stated, followed by specific objectives. The methods section should then describe how each objective was addressed.

    Line 100: The methods section should begin with a study site description subsection.

    Line 104: The study presents results in terms of loads but does not explain how these loads were calculated. Were data aggregated? How were missing values handled?

    Line 106: Database citations should follow standard citation formats (e.g., NWIS, year), with access dates listed in the references. Please check this throughout the whole manuscript as it happens multiple times.

    Line 120: Table 1: Are there two grand Rivers? You named them differently throughout the text. Please be consistent.

    Line 128: Statistical Tools: Clearly link each statistical method to the specific research question or objective it addresses. The mathematical details are well-presented, but the hydrological meaning of each method should be clarified. For instance, what is the difference between a long term trend and a long term monotonic trend (methods 1 vs 2 .)

    Line 132: The use of the word seasonal here is confusing. In other parts of the text is used for climatological seasons but here the meaning is different. Can you replace it for a different term, so it is not confusing for the reader?

    Line 185: Were the GEV models used to investigate flow pattern or P loading, as expressed at the beginning of the sub-section? Please clarify.

    Line 205: The statement about extreme events and return levels should be clarified, as they are typically defined using hydroclimatological data rather than calendar dates.

    Line 207: The study uses machine learning to predict river flow, yet presents predictions for P loads. It assumes concentrations remain stable, which is a significant assumption requiring more justification. The methodology for this transition should be explained in greater detail.

    Line 250: An analysis of nutrient concentrations is necessary to complement the discussion on nutrient loads. Especially as down the line you venture on the impact of management practices, and climate change.

    Line 255:  “suggesting improvements in mitigating soil erosion”. This belongs to the discussion section.

    Line 262: Figure 1: The study site map should be placed in the methods section, while a separate figure presenting trends in a readable format should be included in the results.

    Line 276: The management of missing data should be addressed in methods. In addition, the details for the linear regression should also be explained in methods. Please check this as it happens multiple times throughout the text.

    Line 292 and 304: Clarify why some figures show negative loads and ensure figure captions explicitly state differences in methodologies. In addition all these changes and exceptions in methodology should be explained in methods.

    Line 320: What do you mean by excessive? Greater than what?

    Line 328: This is the first time you talk about concentration. It needs to be mentioned in methods. The analysis should be expanded as was suggested before. This analysis is not enough.

    Line 336: Figure 7: is this a trend or the monthly average over a time period?

    Line 339: Subsection 3.2: A correlation between flows and concentrations would be more appropriate than between flows and loads, as flow is already a component of load.

    Line 340: None of these analyses was explained in the methods section.

    Line 341: Conservation practices should be described in the methods section, including historical changes and their expected effects on nutrient loads.

    Line 380: Figure 10: The caption needs to be re-arranged. First explain the figure and the methods and details for all the rivers. Then, explain Rouge River that is different. In addition to clarification in figures captions, you need to explain what you did for Rouge River due to lack of observations in the methods section.

    Line 410 to 412: This sentence belongs to methods.

    Line 412: Clarify whether predictions refer to TP, SRP, or both. The assumption that increased flow directly translates to increased loads is overly simplistic. Biogeochemical interactions, seasonality, and other factors must be considered. On the one hand, the study needs a deep analysis of concentrations, land covers and P management practices in each sub watershed. In addition, it also needs to be more conservative with extrapolating conclusions, that are not a direct result of the applied methods.

    Line 435: indicating or assuming? do you assume the concentration will be the same? or the analysis indicate pollution will persist? Please clarify.

    Line 444: This is confusing. Is this a decline in flow rates or loading rates. In line 439 is stated that annual flow rates increased.

    Line 455: Ensure that conclusions are based on presented analyses. Be cautious with causal language such as “this trend is driven by.”

    Line 464: If reduced atmospheric deposition is influencing the TN:TP ratio, why is this trend not observed across all rivers?

    Line 473 to 482:  Correlations for nutrient concentrations should be analyzed. Additionally, this section should acknowledge and engage with existing literature on the topic. There is no novelty in these results. This has been discussed and shown in the literature for decades now.

    Line 496: This paragraph needs to be merged with the previous paragraph.

    Line 502: You can reach this conclusion if you present an analysis of the concentrations. Did the concentrations increase? Is this for TP or SRP, TP tends to be correlated with TSS hence is attached to flow rate and to extreme events, SRP tends to be more stable.

    Line 510: Is there any study that analyzed the results of this policy (balanced P fertilization approach)?

Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-2024-302-RC2
Jiaxin Wang, Zhiming Qi, and Tiequan Zhang
Jiaxin Wang, Zhiming Qi, and Tiequan Zhang

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We analyzed annual, monthly, and extreme daily P loss trends from 1974 to 2021 across eight major P-contributing tributaries, and did not observe a clear reduction of annual P load among these tributaries. We found a decline trend for daily P load in Maumee River under extreme daily flow levels, and controlling P load remains a more pressing issue compared to nitrogen. We predicted that P load in almost all tributaries will continue to pose challenges to Lake Erie.
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