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High-resolution operational soil moisture monitoring for forests in the Middle Germany
Abstract. The forests of Central Germany (Saxony, Saxony-Anhalt, and Thuringia) are vital components of the local ecosystems, economy, and recreation. However, in recent years, these forests have faced significant challenges due to prolonged climate-change-induced droughts, causing water shortages, tree stress, and pest outbreaks. One of the key components of the forests’ vitality and productivity is the availability of soil moisture. Given the anticipated increase of frequency and severity of droughts events, there is a growing demand for accurate and real-time soil moisture information. This underscores the need for development of an appropriate monitoring tool to make forest management strategies more effective.
The article introduces an operational high-resolution soil moisture monitoring framework for the forests in Middle Germany, which addresses the main limitations and problems of the existing monitoring systems. The key components of this system include advanced LWF-BROOK90 1D water balance model, large database of National Federal Forest Inventory, real-time climate data from German Weather Service, and web information platform for the results presentation with daily updates. This system empowers forest managers and other decision-makers to take targeted, local measures for sustainable forest management, aiding in both drought mitigation and long-term forest health in the face of climate change.
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RC1: 'Comment on hess-2023-303', Anonymous Referee #1, 29 Jan 2024
OVERVIEW
The paper describes the development of an operational modelling system for soil moisture monitoring in the forests of the Middle Germany. The modelling system is described, along with some results and preliminary findings.
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GENERAL COMMENTS
The paper is fairly well written and clear, the topic might be relevant to HESS readership, but I believe that a more scientifically sound investigation should be carried out. I have listed below the general comments, with the indication of their relevance, that I believe should be carefully addressed.
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- MAJOR: The authors have developed a point-scale modelling system and have emphasised throughout the paper that this type of analysis has several advantages over a grid-based modelling system. Point-scale analysis can have some advantages, but with the current availability of computing and storage facilities, grid-based analysis has become very feasible even at 30 m resolution (e.g. Vergopolan et al., 2021, https://doi.org/10.1038/s41597-021-01050-2). Furthermore, point scale analysis does not consider lateral movement of water, which is particularly important over shallow soils and sloping terrain. Therefore, grid-based systems have also advantages with respect to point-scale simulations. The discussion of the limitations of the proposed approach should be clarified and the comparison with grid-based analysis should be made more fair.
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- MAJOR: In the abstract it reads “soil moisture monitoring framework … which addresses the main limitations and problems of the existing monitoring systems.”. This is not demonstrated at all in the paper.
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- MAJOR: Two soil moisture modelling systems were mentioned in the introduction, the German Drought Monitor and the German Weather Service Soil Moisture Viewer. These systems have high resolution, 4 km and 1 km respectively, not so different from the point modelling system developed in this study, note that the average distance of the rain gauge is 5 km and more for the other meteorological data. I believe that a comparison should be made between the simulation carried out in this study and these systems. Through this analysis, the potential added value of the developed monitoring system can be evaluated.
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- MAJOR: A major and important issue is the lack of validation. Only one figure, not discussed, with a comparison to a single soil moisture station. In addition, the paper also reports long-term averages of evaporation per forest type. How accurate are the evaporation estimates? How accurate are the soil moisture estimates? In order to be published, the paper should perform a robust validation of the simulations.
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- MODERATE: The text contains several errors, and some parts are unclear (see specific comments for some of them). Acronyms are not defined. Many references are in German. Four figures are in German. This can't be accepted in an international journal. The figures should be translated into English and the German references should be avoided or minimised.
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- MODERATE: The model is described in Section 3.1. Several modules are mentioned, e.g. vegperiod, betamode, b90, ... However, a detailed description of these modules is missing. The reader is lost and, for example, it's unclear how the values of the model parameters were assigned. How many parameters? The model description needs to be improved.
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In the sequel, a number of specific comments to be addressed is reported, but not a comprehensive list.
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SPECIFIC COMMENTS (L: line or lines)
L71: “with an operational climate data”. It’s not climate, but meteorological data. To be corrected throughout the paper.
L92: The size of the investigated area should be specified.
Figure 1 caption: Specify acronyms.
L128: What is the “REST-API access”?
L135-136: The sentence is unclear, and it should be revised.
L140: What does LWF stand for? Check all acronyms.
L188: Why are some stations filtered? What do the authors mean with “filtered”?
L190: Which criteria should be matched?
L191-193: The sentence is unclear, and it should be revised.
L201: It’s not clear for which period the soil moisture data are simulated from the system. Here it reads 5 months, later in the text 30-year period. It must be clarified.
L08-209: Approximate distance for rain gauge equal to 5 km, more than 10 km for other meteo data. The actual resolution of the simulated soil moisture cannot be less than 5 km.
L226-227: It’s unclear if NA values are present or not in the data. Please revise the sentence.
L233-235: The sentence is unclear, and it should be revised.
L270: I don’t agree that raster-based simulations do not account for local conditions, it depends on the grid size. Please revise (see the first general comment).
L273-274: I don’t believe the two examples “illustrate the advantage of the point-based framework”. This part should be revised.
L335: What is the time period of the long-term simulations?
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RECOMMENDATION
Based on the above comments, I suggest the paper needs a major revision before its potential publication.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-2023-303-RC1 - AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Ivan Vorobevskii, 15 Apr 2024
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CC1: 'Comment on hess-2023-303', Friedrich Boeing, 15 Feb 2024
Dear authors,
We welcome the efforts to improve the existing drought monitoring systems in Germany. We wanted to draw attention to the fact that a demonstration of the 1 km version of the German Drought Monitor was presented in HESS in 2022 (https://www.doi.org/10.5194/hess-26-5137-2022). We would like to encourage the authors to add references to the 1 km version of the German Drought Monitor.
Kind regards,,
Friedrich BoeingCitation: https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-2023-303-CC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on CC1', Ivan Vorobevskii, 15 Apr 2024
Dear Friedrich,
Thank you for the comment. We will definitely include this reference in the revised version.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/hess-2023-303-AC1
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AC1: 'Reply on CC1', Ivan Vorobevskii, 15 Apr 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on hess-2023-303', Anonymous Referee #2, 27 Mar 2024
OVERVIEW:
The paper aims to present in detail a soil moisture monitoring for the forests of the Middle Germany focusing on presenting the website based platform hosting the monitoring framework. The methodological framework is mostly well described and justified throughout the manuscript. The available data and the capabilities to display soil moisture status over a large forest territory is without a doubt valuable for stakeholders, forest managers and scientists. Moreover, the paper is generally well written (I especially liked the introduction). From reading the manuscript it is easy to see that the author team is very knowledgeable about their system and have taken the time to describe it and justify most of the choices within the framework architecture. Â
However, at its current state the manuscript appears to me not completely useful for non of the collectives you aim to address (i.e. international scientific community or stakeholders and forest managers at the national level). Below I outline why, some suggestions as well as specific comments on text and figures.
GENERAL COMMENTS
What would make the manuscript more interesting/engaging to the international scientific community?
- Â (i) Improve readability: there are multiple acronyms throughout the text (and also in the figures) which are not always easy to remember (reader needs to search through the document). Some of the explanations are very specific for forest managers or forest researcher (e.g. see my comment on track corners). I think the soil moisture monitoring system you have developed is valuable and very interesting.
-  (ii) Scientific discussion and placing your SM monitoring within the context of available literature and ongoing SM monitoring efforts elsewhere: I miss more discussion of how the system you present is “an operational high-resolution soil moisture monitoring framework for the forests in Middle Germany, which addresses the main limitations and problems of the existing monitoring systems”. What are the existing monitoring systems and what are their shortcomings? Could you include a discussion on that? Also, are you referring to existing monitoring systems in Germany or around the world? What would be a comparably good SM monitoring system in another country? An example of an SM monitoring systems, based on SM observations from cosmic ray neutron sensing would be COSMOS UK (see https://cosmos.ceh.ac.uk/data ). They feature a similar system to the traffic light system you describe, you could perhaps compare it to such a system and/or include examples from forested sites.
(iii) Discussion on soil moisture observations and their usefulness in such a SM monitoring framework: There is no mention or discussion on how to incorporate actual soil moisture observations in your framework and how it would benefit from it. Are there any hydrological observatories where you could apply your modelling framework but then improve it? You make a shy suggestion in the Outlook section, but that is rather short and underdeveloped.
(iv) Perhaps too much German on figures and in text: in Section 4.4. as a non-proficient German speaker I found it difficult and unmotivating to follow. I would find it much more interesting, if the platform could be presented in the publication already with translation in English (i.e. wait until then to publish this contribution or state a date, ideally in the near future, when the website will be available in English). Alternatively you can take the focus away from the online platform and mention it briefly and also produce a short video tutorial in English for users interested in the data and science behind it. Then focus much more on discussing the science (see general comment ii).
What would make the manuscript more interesting/engaging to stakeholders, environmental authorities and forest managers at the national level?
- If the platform is intended to engage more stakeholders and forest managers in Germany, I believe it would be much more beneficial to publish in a German scientific journal which is also easily available for environmental authorities and forest managers. This is also where German speaking scientists interested in the platform (again because it is only in German at the moment) can explore it. At the moment the only way to go through the different options is via translating the page. When you do that the images stall and the page takes longer to load. For the expert mode you need to know at least some German or be patient to translate to start using the data files downloaded.
- To address such a public, perhaps also the text would need to be rewritten and more emphasis on how to use the platform and perhaps a couple of examples of the benefits of using it (i.e. practical examples) should be included.
To summarise, I think the SM monitoring framework presented here is very interesting and valuable as well as it has constituted a great effort to produce and should be shared within the international scientific community. However, I think that currently the paper is not suitable for HESS and should find its place in a different journal. For that I suggest either major revisions with a possible change of scope or a submission to a different journal.Â
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Besides, see my specific comments, line by line, below:
Figure 1: Add a small inlet of Germany in one of the corners. Complement the Figure 1 caption with the meaning of the 3206 BWI abbreviation to aid readers. Briefly explain what the black dots mean (I understand is the inventory but please make it explicit).
Line 128: Have a very brief explanation of what REST API access is (few words)
Line 139: Section 3.1. is well documented/ choices well explained. However, I suggest a more intuitive sub-header starting with the model type and then introducing the name. spell out that it is a soil hydrological model and it is 1D. Line 140: I would start the paragraph with saying what the model is about and then go into these details for the benefit of readers who are not familiar.
Figure 2: explain in the legend or caption what KL or RR stand for. Make the dot for the BWI sites slightly larger on the legend. Why is this figure relevant to show here and why not in Annexes?
Figure 3: same comment on the BWI dot
Figure 4: remove "violin plots with" from figure caption, it is redundant. Otherwise figure is quite informative
Figure 5: useful figure giving a good overview. Small detail on caption, change to "for a selected"
Figure 6: green balloon "Daily meteostation data from 2010" sounds like the data is from that year. I understand it is from 2010 onwards and up to current?
Section 4.1. Line 272 what does "first hundreds of meters" mean in this sentence? please rephrase or clarify. Also you could discuss the differences between the point and raster set up already in Methods (I did not see it there). This section is not so easy to read, I expect more documenting (i.e. references and comparison between raster and point set ups).
Line 274 typo "in" instead of "is"
Figure 7: On your (b) plot in the legend the light yellow and green are very difficult to see. You have the same issue on the lightest colours in Figure 8 on the legend.
Fig 9: very nice and informative on the evolution of SM along a whole year
Line 357: for the readers who may not know what track corners are, can you please include a reference?
Figure 10: another interesting and useful figure from scientific point of view.
Figure 11 and 12: entirely in German, basically snapshots and (at least when I download the pdf), the resolution is quite low. I struggle to see the text (Fig 11 for example) and think it occupies unnecessary space. Instead of these figures an explanatory video could be much more useful.
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- AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Ivan Vorobevskii, 15 Apr 2024
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