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) /Name /Comment /Rect [482.818318 167.17082 502.818318 185.17082] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 37 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Sentence not clear: do you mean "was compensated for by ..."?) /CreationDate (D:20140101134516+01'00') >> endobj 37 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101134516+01'00') /P 10 0 R /NM (e5417dc5-6dde-41cf-b72a8fbb3c8efbc9) /Open true /Rect [595.276 105.17082 745.276 185.17082] /Parent 36 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 38 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 151 >> stream x͑1 EwNcdTu:t)%AINHF/,@RhʜLh!.t+E=yi FR}xwʐv[ Nt~٣/ %0&TУ3' u:yf& endstream endobj 39 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im1 149 0 R /Im2 150 0 R >> >> endobj 40 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 4 /M (D:20140101134808+01'00') /P 11 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 151 0 R >> /NM (f2852122-ecc3-49ec-a2e03e49721e169d) /Rect [224.032321 538.867249 330.904025 549.577149] /Subj (Highlight) /Subtype /Highlight /QuadPoints [226.157998 549.577165 328.778362 549.577165 226.157998 538.867254 328.778362 538.867254] /CreationDate (D:20140101134808+01'00') >> endobj 41 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140216133929+01'00') /P 11 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 152 0 R >> /NM (f6ddd065-3df0-40b5-b28301cae15da0d1) /RC (Check reference. Dorigo \(2010\) HESS. Reference is mentioned later, but should be given here as well.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [328.376434 541.260855 348.376434 559.260855] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 42 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Check reference. Dorigo \(2010\) HESS. Reference is mentioned later, but should be given here as well.) /CreationDate (D:20140101134810+01'00') >> endobj 42 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101134810+01'00') /P 11 0 R /NM (de90c1a2-fbec-4951-98851595c564db0c) /Open true /Rect [595.276 479.260855 745.276 559.260855] /Parent 41 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 43 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101135053+01'00') /P 11 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 153 0 R >> /NM (9b0b2ce1-c1ec-42a0-a19f6cdd4a6ead60) /RC (References to atmospheric signal removing are lacking.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [465.574807 293.866643 485.574807 311.866643] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 44 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (References to atmospheric signal removing are lacking.) /CreationDate (D:20140101135040+01'00') >> endobj 44 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101135040+01'00') /P 11 0 R /NM (5a60fce5-047d-47a0-82dac6dd473217dd) /Open true /Rect [595.276 231.866643 745.276 311.866643] /Parent 43 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 45 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 151 >> stream x͑1 EwNcdTu:t)%AINHF/,@RhʜLh!.t+E=yi FR}xwʐv[ NYt7Gmw?G]_5KaMZG5#*g`?J߭O8u~?f* endstream endobj 46 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im3 154 0 R /Im4 155 0 R >> >> endobj 47 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101135304+01'00') /P 12 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 156 0 R >> /NM (4b8ebba9-4eae-4893-925e6a29e4e7e632) /RC (include
) /Name /Comment /Rect [210.670726 774.411158 230.670726 792.411158] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 48 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (include) /CreationDate (D:20140101135301+01'00') >> endobj 48 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101135301+01'00') /P 12 0 R /NM (5dff33b9-b134-4347-8948a036ca83ac9b) /Open true /Rect [595.276 712.411158 745.276 792.411158] /Parent 47 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 49 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101135603+01'00') /P 12 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 157 0 R >> /NM (7feb7940-9252-4a1e-a039e452981da0f7) /RC (2 different forcing datasets were used for 2 different periods \(2003-2008, 2009-2012\). How do you ensure that the outcoming dataset is homogeneous?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [467.074242 566.000277 487.074242 584.000277] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 50 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (2 different forcing datasets were used for 2 different periods \(2003-2008, 2009-2012\). How do you ensure that the outcoming dataset is homogeneous?) /CreationDate (D:20140101135529+01'00') >> endobj 50 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101135529+01'00') /P 12 0 R /NM (cd54f6ea-38b5-4569-b84a9d97531d8798) /Open true /Rect [595.276 504.000277 745.276 584.000277] /Parent 49 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 51 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101135739+01'00') /P 12 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 158 0 R >> /NM (74528bc6-f832-430b-877aa6e2acaba5f2) /RC (Why was the Princeton data not used for all models? This would make the model outputs more comparable. In addition, bias-correction on Princeton data implies that the Princeton data is more close to the 'truth'. Can this be corroborated?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [138.697809 503.027204 158.697809 521.027204] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 52 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Why was the Princeton data not used for all models? This would make the model outputs more comparable. In addition, bias-correction on Princeton data implies that the Princeton data is more close to the 'truth'. Can this be corroborated?) /CreationDate (D:20140101135617+01'00') >> endobj 52 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101135617+01'00') /P 12 0 R /NM (d4c21843-a211-4436-ad7c91b8de8d46c7) /Open true /Rect [595.276 432.031051 745.276 512.031051] /Parent 51 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 53 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101135854+01'00') /P 12 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 159 0 R >> /NM (caf3733c-4e14-48f8-a9b29ccde83bc005) /RC (What are the sources for this 0.5 degree data? References are missing.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [385.354993 314.857667 405.354993 332.857667] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 54 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (What are the sources for this 0.5 degree data? References are missing.) /CreationDate (D:20140101135838+01'00') >> endobj 54 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101135838+01'00') /P 12 0 R /NM (e56c7cde-e8a7-4b6b-aefd7855b26069f4) /Open true /Rect [595.276 252.857667 745.276 332.857667] /Parent 53 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 55 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101135928+01'00') /P 12 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 160 0 R >> /NM (39f6507c-3eb8-4cf6-afe686a82324d402) /RC (Which global hydrological model? PCR-GLOBWB? There is no reference!
) /Name /Comment /Rect [404.09794 305.861514 424.09794 323.861514] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 56 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Which global hydrological model? PCR-GLOBWB? There is no reference!) /CreationDate (D:20140101135910+01'00') >> endobj 56 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101135910+01'00') /P 12 0 R /NM (66b5d396-c404-458b-ba383027ea88ae25) /Open true /Rect [595.276 223.62017 745.276 303.62017] /Parent 55 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 57 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101140130+01'00') /P 12 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 161 0 R >> /NM (5f8a129a-2886-492e-92c2558fab14ec17) /RC (Which scheme? Again no references at all!
) /Name /Comment /Rect [278.895053 167.17082 298.895053 185.17082] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 58 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Which scheme? Again no references at all!) /CreationDate (D:20140101140122+01'00') >> endobj 58 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101140122+01'00') /P 12 0 R /NM (4dc03639-68fe-4e10-aa310b1eda25b111) /Open true /Rect [595.276 105.17082 745.276 185.17082] /Parent 57 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 59 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 151 >> stream x͑1 EwNcdTu:t)%AINHF/,@RhʜLh!.t+E=yi FR}xwʐv[ Nt7Gmw?G]_5KaMZG5#*g`?J߭O8uf. endstream endobj 60 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im5 162 0 R /Im6 163 0 R >> >> endobj 61 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101140733+01'00') /P 13 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 164 0 R >> /NM (94085c00-afbb-4934-a8b3a047fcb6ef20) /RC (Is this then corrected for by the DA scheme, using the additional observations? Please explain.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [410.095683 527.766626 430.095683 545.766626] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 62 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Is this then corrected for by the DA scheme, using the additional observations? Please explain.) /CreationDate (D:20140101140714+01'00') >> endobj 62 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101140714+01'00') /P 13 0 R /NM (90297afe-dab2-4f3b-98c30cef591854d3) /Open true /Rect [595.276 465.766626 745.276 545.766626] /Parent 61 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 63 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140101141050+01'00') /P 13 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 165 0 R >> /NM (ef6222c7-0863-4993-a79d440c69562e98) /RC (Mean of each month individually? Or was a climatology made? This needs some clarification. If a climatology was used, then trends over the 10-year period cannot be observed. If a time series was used, then what was done to fill in the last 2 years, that are not covered by the River and Lake altimetry dataset?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [231.662827 385.327534 251.662827 403.327534] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 64 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Mean of each month individually? Or was a climatology made? This needs some clarification. If a climatology was used, then trends over the 10-year period cannot be observed. If a time series was used, then what was done to fill in the last 2 years, that are not covered by the River and Lake altimetry dataset? ) /CreationDate (D:20140101140946+01'00') >> endobj 64 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140101140946+01'00') /P 13 0 R /NM (73903773-d7a0-4287-b8241a66dc70ccea) /Open true /Rect [595.276 323.327534 745.276 403.327534] /Parent 63 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 65 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140202133040+01'00') /P 13 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 166 0 R >> /NM (6e73b8db-6320-49be-aaae08856d9e2bb4) /RC (Okavango delta is in Botswana, not in Zimbabwe! It contains huge volumes of water, part of which \(close to the surface\) is highly variable over the season. Can you simply assume this is negligible?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [392.852172 335.848691 412.852172 353.848691] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 66 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Okavango delta is in Botswana, not in Zimbabwe! It contains huge volumes of water, part of which \(close to the surface\) is highly variable over the season. Can you simply assume this is negligible? ) /CreationDate (D:20140202132830+01'00') >> endobj 66 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140202133501+01'00') /P 13 0 R /NM (25ae77df-8e58-4843-81c90a90476c6f7f) /Open true /Rect [589.221834 187.694365 739.221834 349.350615] /Parent 65 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 67 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140202133143+01'00') /P 13 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 167 0 R >> /NM (54bcd621-6e46-4914-8b6c2e12383bbd58) /RC (This is not an uncertainty estimate, but a measure for spatial variability \(?\)
) /Name /Comment /Rect [367.361764 290.118246 387.361764 308.118246] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 68 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (This is not an uncertainty estimate, but a measure for spatial variability \(?\)) /CreationDate (D:20140202133113+01'00') >> endobj 68 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140202133456+01'00') /P 13 0 R /NM (1324d730-4e6a-4b6f-8129e958a158e95c) /Open true /Rect [589.221834 108.538126 739.221834 203.163126] /Parent 67 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 69 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 151 >> stream x͑1 EwNcdTu:t)%AINHF/,@RhʜLh!.t+E=yi FR}xwʐv[ N9nf(,k,0R7Bj.{GTz[$pf2 endstream endobj 70 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im7 168 0 R /Im8 169 0 R >> >> endobj 71 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140202133948+01'00') /P 14 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 170 0 R >> /NM (64758757-9e6c-48c1-9658fd17ff243604) /RC (May need one sentence to explain what 'leakage' is for the reader that is not aware of GRACE retrievals.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [179.932293 792.403464 199.932293 810.403464] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 72 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (May need one sentence to explain what 'leakage' is for the reader that is not aware of GRACE retrievals.) /CreationDate (D:20140202133922+01'00') >> endobj 72 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140202133922+01'00') /P 14 0 R /NM (41543e92-3958-408a-ae8f6dc38f6addba) /Open true /Rect [595.276 730.403464 745.276 810.403464] /Parent 71 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 73 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140202135527+01'00') /P 14 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 171 0 R >> /NM (5019934e-e3b8-47d0-9825eb8c4981052f) /RC (Explain why the smoother was needed. Was it applied to both St^b and GRACE TWS estimates?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [237.030263 105.013151 257.030263 123.013151] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 74 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Explain why the smoother was needed. Was it applied to both St^b and GRACE TWS estimates? ) /CreationDate (D:20140202135445+01'00') >> endobj 74 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140202135445+01'00') /P 14 0 R /NM (70f028ed-3904-48d5-81d5e5d7b2493f0d) /Open true /Rect [595.276 43.013151 745.276 123.013151] /Parent 73 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 75 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 152 >> stream x͑1 EwNcdTu:t)%AINHF/,@RhʜLh!.t+E=yi FR}xwʐv[ Nyݵu}QX,,ĀzTs;r$N_' f] endstream endobj 76 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im9 172 0 R /Im10 173 0 R >> >> endobj 77 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140202140124+01'00') /P 15 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 174 0 R >> /NM (c1dc7f9d-37cd-49b0-9c07878237f0678a) /RC (two times the same symbol, please choose a different symbol for the updated yt^a. The equation is not clear to me. Shouldn't it be yt^a = yt^b + dyt \(i.e. updated GRACE-like TWS = background TWS + increment\)?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [132.016855 763.883586 152.016855 781.883586] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 78 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (two times the same symbol, please choose a different symbol for the updated yt^a. The equation is not clear to me. Shouldn't it be yt^a = yt^b + dyt \(i.e. updated GRACE-like TWS = background TWS + increment\)?) /CreationDate (D:20140202135606+01'00') >> endobj 78 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140202135606+01'00') /P 15 0 R /NM (b288fc2d-786f-4af1-930136d3e034cc34) /Open true /Rect [595.276 701.883586 745.276 781.883586] /Parent 77 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 79 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140202135849+01'00') /P 15 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 175 0 R >> /NM (38ff6b79-6cb4-4a95-a050bd1141aa99d1) /RC (Is the GRACE-like TWS the modelled \(weighted averaged\) TWS, smoothed with gaussian kernel?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [271.834706 790.886472 291.834706 808.886472] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 80 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Is the GRACE-like TWS the modelled \(weighted averaged\) TWS, smoothed with gaussian kernel?) /CreationDate (D:20140202135825+01'00') >> endobj 80 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140202135825+01'00') /P 15 0 R /NM (9e94527e-ebee-45c4-877bf24a324aa4b8) /Open true /Rect [595.276 728.886472 745.276 808.886472] /Parent 79 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 81 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 151 >> stream x͑1 EwNcdTu:t)%AINHF/,@RhʜLh!.t+E=yi FR}xwʐv[ Nݽu}RX,0a41`jw\(}>I /Ivf endstream endobj 82 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im11 176 0 R /Im12 177 0 R >> >> endobj 83 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140216135519+01'00') /P 16 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 178 0 R >> /NM (08056a6c-f5e1-4403-b8dd8db5f5f1aec4) /RC (Consider presenting this text along with the equations applied. This would make it more readible.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [497.463513 783.685703 517.463513 801.685703] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 84 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Consider presenting this text along with the equations applied. This would make it more readible.) /CreationDate (D:20140210200408+01'00') >> endobj 84 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210200408+01'00') /P 16 0 R /NM (5a4c0cca-7e3f-4cd5-81a48cc794d55e2e) /Open true /Rect [595.276 721.685703 745.276 801.685703] /Parent 83 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 85 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210200519+01'00') /P 16 0 R /NM (33835de4-cd0b-4b56-8f3cf1c3a3d5b522) /Open true /Rect [492.6629 694.254517 642.6629 802.285767] /Parent 86 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 86 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210200556+01'00') /P 16 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 179 0 R >> /NM (06199caa-e291-4970-87e27d77c334d249) /RC (does this technique include spatial correlation in the error structure? Needs to be discussed if not.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [468.059759 607.871397 488.059759 625.871397] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 85 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (does this technique include spatial correlation in the error structure? Needs to be discussed if not.) /CreationDate (D:20140210200247+01'00') >> endobj 87 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210200739+01'00') /P 16 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 180 0 R >> /NM (048fca6b-91bf-40bc-beea6ecab5af4bef) /RC (storage change errors are also correlated in time for TWS model estimates. During dry periods, errors are much smaller than in wet periods. This will be the case in particular in regions with distinct rainy seasons.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [474.060525 542.459915 494.060525 560.459915] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 88 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (storage change errors are also correlated in time for TWS model estimates. During dry periods, errors are much smaller than in wet periods. This will be the case in particular in regions with distinct rainy seasons.) /CreationDate (D:20140210200641+01'00') >> endobj 88 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210200641+01'00') /P 16 0 R /NM (259d79a2-e146-4677-8b2dc242d7453751) /Open true /Rect [595.276 480.459915 745.276 560.459915] /Parent 87 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 89 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210200930+01'00') /P 16 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 181 0 R >> /NM (e4b0024c-674c-4e74-97f116fdbf348997) /RC (you mean "not equivalent"?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [475.860755 156.018603 495.860755 174.018603] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 90 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (you mean "not equivalent"?) /CreationDate (D:20140210200922+01'00') >> endobj 90 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210200922+01'00') /P 16 0 R /NM (0304fc0b-732a-4bff-99f9c0ea74dd731f) /Open true /Rect [595.276 94.018603 745.276 174.018603] /Parent 89 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 91 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 151 >> stream x͑1 EwNcdTu:t)%AINHF/,@RhʜLh!.t+E=yi FR}xwʐv[ NJ移9j{>XahbH=Q9Qn}Y^Mf endstream endobj 92 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im13 182 0 R /Im14 183 0 R >> >> endobj 93 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210201932+01'00') /P 17 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 184 0 R >> /NM (57d3bc81-cf48-43ca-8e0a726a1d9c9db3) /RC (A linear relationship is not expected. In larger rivers, then relationship is more or less known, you may expect that the relationship reads as Q=a*\(h-h0\)^b, where b in a larger river is about 1.7, assuming the width of the channel is >> the water depth.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [407.452021 543.059979 427.452021 561.059979] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 94 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (A linear relationship is not expected. In larger rivers, then relationship is more or less known, you may expect that the relationship reads as Q=a*\(h-h0\)^b, where b in a larger river is about 1.7, assuming the width of the channel is >> the water depth.) /CreationDate (D:20140210201755+01'00') >> endobj 94 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210201755+01'00') /P 17 0 R /NM (1a34bbf8-254f-4b64-9663fa7d2e425952) /Open true /Rect [595.276 481.059979 745.276 561.059979] /Parent 93 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 95 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 153 >> stream x͑=0 1r &mԒ 1Dr8-T8'{]UK+]2$l1 NauFݹ]),)0a43TSXG;YNxRf endstream endobj 96 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im15 185 0 R /Im16 186 0 R >> >> endobj 97 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210202332+01'00') /P 18 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 187 0 R >> /NM (a7d0f2f6-8688-40c1-ad462b5205a8c7f7) /RC (80 mm/month?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [496.263359 772.284484 516.263359 790.284484] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 98 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (80 mm/month?) /CreationDate (D:20140210202326+01'00') >> endobj 98 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210202326+01'00') /P 18 0 R /NM (dd87b492-cbc5-44de-8ab9919ffcfe52a1) /Open true /Rect [595.276 710.284484 745.276 790.284484] /Parent 97 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 99 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210202736+01'00') /P 18 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 188 0 R >> /NM (b266c4ab-ef6e-4b49-a13f1d98e7fe5b25) /RC (This means that errors from GRACE are much smaller than errors in the model estimates. Can this be corroborated by the individual error estimates?
) /Name /Comment /Rect [498.663666 262.229958 518.663666 280.229958] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 100 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (This means that errors from GRACE are much smaller than errors in the model estimates. Can this be corroborated by the individual error estimates?) /CreationDate (D:20140210202705+01'00') >> endobj 100 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210202705+01'00') /P 18 0 R /NM (b2611a88-a863-4041-9af92c7395295dd1) /Open true /Rect [595.276 200.229958 745.276 280.229958] /Parent 99 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 101 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210203134+01'00') /P 18 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 189 0 R >> /NM (3e10a07b-9428-4c5e-9204d13ac5441ce7) /RC (Threre's a lot of observations, but no explanations for these results.
Suggestion for the Congo and Amazon change in trend may be due to not including of riuver routing in these rivers in the models. Routing delays water storage in downstream regions by 2 to 3 months in these rivers.
) /Name /Comment /Rect [469.859988 183.621554 489.859988 201.621554] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 102 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (Threre's a lot of observations, but no explanations for these results.\rSuggestion for the Congo and Amazon change in trend may be due to not including of riuver routing in these rivers in the models. Routing delays water storage in downstream regions by 2 to 3 months in these rivers.) /CreationDate (D:20140210203007+01'00') >> endobj 102 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210203007+01'00') /P 18 0 R /NM (e042cbb4-2867-438d-9e756153863fb89a) /Open true /Rect [595.276 121.621554 745.276 201.621554] /Parent 101 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 103 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 152 >> stream x͑1 EwNcdTu:t)%AINHF/,@RhʜLh!.t+E=yi FR}xwʐv[ NOwsv3|I`gÔĀzTs;r$N_' V`f endstream endobj 104 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im17 190 0 R /Im18 191 0 R >> >> endobj 105 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210204010+01'00') /P 19 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 192 0 R >> /NM (721facd0-6409-45b2-8b83e9689c1b0dad) /RC (again I miss some ideas that could explain the points with strong improvements, as well as the points with reduction of correlation.
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) /Name /Comment /Rect [300.638384 186.621875 320.638384 204.621875] /Subj (Sticky Note) /Popup 112 0 R /Subtype /Text /Contents (...but reduced elsewhere...) /CreationDate (D:20140210205725+01'00') >> endobj 112 0 obj << /F 25 /M (D:20140210205725+01'00') /P 21 0 R /NM (42547a70-c414-4f71-afabea4a65ffc54b) /Open true /Rect [595.276 124.621875 745.276 204.621875] /Parent 111 0 R /Subtype /Popup >> endobj 113 0 obj << /Filter [/FlateDecode] /Length 152 >> stream x͑=0 1r &mԒ 1Dr'[T8'&RK+pz!s~v?GF K La$RMw\vGT.?>K /Of endstream endobj 114 0 obj << /ProcSet [/PDF] /XObject << /Im23 198 0 R /Im24 199 0 R >> >> endobj 115 0 obj << /C [1 1 0] /F 28 /M (D:20140210210544+01'00') /P 22 0 R /T (Reviewer) /AP << /N 200 0 R >> /NM (72e95ae2-3b75-47b6-89788350edde3084) /RC (In Zambezi and Okavango, large interannual storage variability is experienced in deep Kalahari sand layers. So 10-years is a little bit short probably.
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