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    <journal-meta><journal-id journal-id-type="publisher">HESS</journal-id><journal-title-group>
    <journal-title>Hydrology and Earth System Sciences</journal-title>
    <abbrev-journal-title abbrev-type="publisher">HESS</abbrev-journal-title><abbrev-journal-title abbrev-type="nlm-ta">Hydrol. Earth Syst. Sci.</abbrev-journal-title>
  </journal-title-group><issn pub-type="epub">1607-7938</issn><publisher>
    <publisher-name>Copernicus Publications</publisher-name>
    <publisher-loc>Göttingen, Germany</publisher-loc>
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      <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5194/hess-25-6333-2021</article-id><title-group><article-title>Comment on “A comparison of catchment travel times and storage deduced from deuterium and tritium tracers using StorAge Selection functions” by Rodriguez et al. (2021)</article-title><alt-title>Comment on “A comparison of catchment travel times and storage”</alt-title>
      </title-group><?xmltex \runningtitle{Comment on ``A comparison of catchment travel times and storage''}?><?xmltex \runningauthor{M. K. Stewart et al.}?>
      <contrib-group>
        <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes" rid="aff1">
          <name><surname>Stewart</surname><given-names>Michael Kilgour</given-names></name>
          
        <ext-link>https://orcid.org/0000-0001-8636-4152</ext-link></contrib>
        <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no" rid="aff2">
          <name><surname>Morgenstern</surname><given-names>Uwe</given-names></name>
          
        <ext-link>https://orcid.org/0000-0001-9821-9737</ext-link></contrib>
        <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no" rid="aff3">
          <name><surname>Cartwright</surname><given-names>Ian</given-names></name>
          
        <ext-link>https://orcid.org/0000-0001-5300-4716</ext-link></contrib>
        <aff id="aff1"><label>1</label><institution>Aquifer Dynamics and GNS Science, P.O. Box 30 368, Lower Hutt 5040, New
Zealand</institution>
        </aff>
        <aff id="aff2"><label>2</label><institution>GNS Science, P.O. Box 30 368, Lower Hutt 5040, New Zealand</institution>
        </aff>
        <aff id="aff3"><label>3</label><institution>School of Earth, Atmosphere and Environment, Monash University,
Clayton, Victoria 3800, Australia</institution>
        </aff>
      </contrib-group>
      <author-notes><corresp id="corr1">Michael Stewart (m.stewart@gns.cri.nz)</corresp></author-notes><pub-date><day>14</day><month>December</month><year>2021</year></pub-date>
      
      <volume>25</volume>
      <issue>12</issue>
      <fpage>6333</fpage><lpage>6338</lpage>
      <history>
        <date date-type="received"><day>11</day><month>March</month><year>2021</year></date>
           <date date-type="rev-request"><day>1</day><month>April</month><year>2021</year></date>
           <date date-type="rev-recd"><day>22</day><month>August</month><year>2021</year></date>
           <date date-type="accepted"><day>30</day><month>October</month><year>2021</year></date>
      </history>
      <permissions>
        <copyright-statement>Copyright: © 2021 Michael Kilgour Stewart et al.</copyright-statement>
        <copyright-year>2021</copyright-year>
      <license license-type="open-access"><license-p>This work is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International License. To view a copy of this licence, visit <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/</ext-link></license-p></license></permissions><self-uri xlink:href="https://hess.copernicus.org/articles/25/6333/2021/hess-25-6333-2021.html">This article is available from https://hess.copernicus.org/articles/25/6333/2021/hess-25-6333-2021.html</self-uri><self-uri xlink:href="https://hess.copernicus.org/articles/25/6333/2021/hess-25-6333-2021.pdf">The full text article is available as a PDF file from https://hess.copernicus.org/articles/25/6333/2021/hess-25-6333-2021.pdf</self-uri>
      <abstract><title>Abstract</title>

      <p id="d1e113">The combined use of deuterium and tritium to determine
travel time distributions (TTDs) in streams is an important development in
catchment hydrology (Rodriguez et al., 2021). This comment takes issue with
Rodriguez et al.'s assertion that the truncation hypothesis may not hold for
catchments in general, i.e. that the use of stable isotopes alone may not
lead to underestimation of travel times or storage compared to tritium. We
discuss reasons why the truncation hypothesis may not appear to hold for the
catchment studied by Rodriguez et al. (2021) but could still apply to the majority of catchments. We also discuss more generally future applications
of tritium in Northern Hemisphere and Southern Hemisphere catchments.</p>
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<sec id="Ch1.S1" sec-type="intro">
  <label>1</label><title>Introduction</title>
      <p id="d1e125">Rodriguez et al. (2021) applied deuterium (<inline-formula><mml:math id="M1" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H) and tritium (<inline-formula><mml:math id="M2" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H)
measurements to determine transit time distributions (TTDs) in a forested
headwater catchment (the Weierbach Catchment in Luxembourg). They used the
method of StorAge Selection (SAS) functions (Botter et al., 2011; Van Der
Velde et al., 2012; Benettin et al., 2017) to transform the input (rainfall)
values of the two tracers to match the concentrations of the tracers in the
stream water draining the catchment, also taking account of output via evapotranspiration. Then they tested the (truncation) hypothesis that the
tritium TTD would extend to longer transit times than the deuterium TTD.
They found that the TTDs were not different within error and concluded that
“the stable isotopes do not seem to systematically underestimate travel
times or storage compared to tritium”.</p>
      <p id="d1e146">The truncation hypothesis put forward by Stewart et al. (2010) states that “The use of stable isotope tracers (<inline-formula><mml:math id="M3" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H and <inline-formula><mml:math id="M4" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">18</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>O) and chloride (Cl) more
than any other tool has influenced the development of the field since their
first use in the 1970s (Dinçer et al., 1970). […] But what
if the information gleaned from stable isotopes actually biased our
understanding of how catchments store and transmit water? What if our now,
almost exclusive use of stable isotopes has led us down a pathway that has
skewed our view of streamwater residence time? Here we show [using tritium
(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M5" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H)] that deeper groundwater contributes more to streamflow than we
are able to ascertain using conventional stable isotope–based hydrograph
separation and streamflow residence time approaches.”</p>
      <p id="d1e176">In this comment we argue that the truncation hypothesis is <italic>not</italic> generally invalidated by the Rodriguez et al. (2021) study.</p>
</sec>
<sec id="Ch1.S2">
  <label>2</label><title>The Weierbach Catchment study</title>
      <p id="d1e190">The conclusion that no significant old water (beyond the range that can be
resolved by stable isotopes) was identified by <inline-formula><mml:math id="M6" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H in the Weierbach
Catchment stream does not mean that such old water does not exist in other
catchments and therefore that the truncation hypothesis should be rejected
for all catchments. In fact, there is evidence that such old water is
present in many other catchments (e.g. Table 1). There are at least two
possible reasons for the results from the Weierbach Catchment.
<list list-type="order"><list-item>
      <p id="d1e204">The large majority of water may actually be within the TT range that can be
determined by stable isotopes. In that case, analysis of the <inline-formula><mml:math id="M7" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H and
<inline-formula><mml:math id="M8" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H isotope data would be expected to yield similar TTDs. Evidence that
this may be the case is given by the following.</p>
      <p id="d1e225"><list list-type="custom"><list-item><label>a.</label>
      <p id="d1e229">The physical characteristics of the catchment. The Weierbach Catchment is
small (42 ha) and has a thin layer of <inline-formula><mml:math id="M9" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi mathvariant="italic">&lt;</mml:mi><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1.5</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula> m of porous gravels
overlying variably weathered bedrock extending to about 5 m depth (Pfister et al., 2017). The catchment area of <inline-formula><mml:math id="M10" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">4.2</mml:mn><mml:mo>×</mml:mo><mml:msup><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">10</mml:mn><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">5</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula> m<inline-formula><mml:math id="M11" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula> and annual
rainfall of about 0.95 m imply water input of <inline-formula><mml:math id="M12" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">4</mml:mn><mml:mo>×</mml:mo><mml:msup><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">10</mml:mn><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">5</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula> m<inline-formula><mml:math id="M13" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>, of which about 50 % or <inline-formula><mml:math id="M14" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn><mml:mo>×</mml:mo><mml:msup><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">10</mml:mn><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">5</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula> m<inline-formula><mml:math id="M15" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>/yr runs off. If the porosity of the
weathered bedrock is 0.1 to 0.2, the water in storage will be 2.1–<inline-formula><mml:math id="M16" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">4.2</mml:mn><mml:mo>×</mml:mo><mml:msup><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">10</mml:mn><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">5</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula> m<inline-formula><mml:math id="M17" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>. This gives an expected mean transit time (MTT) (calculated from storage/runoff) of 1–2 years. If most of the water comes from the thin gravels,
the MTT will be shorter. Either way, it seems unlikely that there is much
water with long TTs in this catchment, although this does not, of course,
rule it out.</p></list-item><list-item><label>b.</label>
      <p id="d1e340">Both <inline-formula><mml:math id="M18" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H and <inline-formula><mml:math id="M19" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H yield an MTT of about 3 years and a 90th TT percentile of about 5 years at the Weierbach Catchment (Rodriguez et al., 2021). Neither isotope gives any indication of a
substantial presence of older water.</p></list-item></list></p></list-item><list-item>
      <p id="d1e362">The use of tritium for determining long TTs (or long tails) in parts of the
Northern Hemisphere is still compromised by the presence of bomb tritium, which partially masks the effect of radioactive decay (see below). This
means that even if there was older water present in the Weierbach Catchment,
tritium from a short period of sampling would not be very effective for
identifying it (as shown below).</p></list-item></list></p>
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  <label>3</label><title>The current situation of tritium in precipitation</title>
      <p id="d1e373">Northern Hemisphere (NH) precipitation was much more strongly affected by
bomb tritium due to nuclear weapons testing in the 1950s than Southern
Hemisphere (SH) precipitation (as shown by data in the WISER database of the
International Atomic Energy Agency, IAEA and WMO, 2021). Figure 1 shows the
tritium records in NH precipitation from Trier (Germany) and Oregon (USA) and SH precipitation from Kaitoke (New Zealand). It can be seen that the NH
bomb peak was about 100 times bigger than the SH bomb peak and was about 2 years earlier. The Trier record (Fig. 1a) is from Schmidt et al. (2020) with
earlier records from Vienna, the Oregon record (Fig. 1b) is from Michel (2006) with scaled earlier and later records (Michel, 2006; Stewart et al.,
2012), and the Kaitoke record (Fig. 1c) is from Morgenstern and Taylor
(2009) and later data. The Trier record is the nearest to the Weierbach Catchment, and the Oregon record is similar to that in the southern Sierra
Nevada on the western coast of the United States (Visser et al., 2019).</p>

      <?xmltex \floatpos{t}?><fig id="Ch1.F1" specific-use="star"><?xmltex \currentcnt{1}?><?xmltex \def\figurename{Figure}?><label>Figure 1</label><caption><p id="d1e378">Tritium concentration in precipitation in <bold>(a)</bold> Trier, Germany, <bold>(b)</bold> Oregon, USA, and <bold>(c)</bold> Kaitoke, NZ, after accounting for radioactive decay up
to 2020 and after mixing of the decayed concentrations using an EPM(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M20" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi>f</mml:mi><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">0.7</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>) model (black curves). <bold>(d)</bold> Comparison of flow-weighted cumulative stream
distribution from the Weierbach Catchment (Fig. 7c, Rodriguez et al., 2021) with cumulative EPM curves.</p></caption>
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<?xmltex \floatpos{t}?><table-wrap id="Ch1.T1"><?xmltex \currentcnt{1}?><label>Table 1</label><caption><p id="d1e414">MTTs for Australian catchments based on tritium.</p></caption><oasis:table frame="topbot"><oasis:tgroup cols="3">
     <oasis:colspec colnum="1" colname="col1" align="left"/>
     <oasis:colspec colnum="2" colname="col2" align="right"/>
     <oasis:colspec colnum="3" colname="col3" align="right"/>
     <oasis:tbody>
       <oasis:row rowsep="1">
         <oasis:entry colname="col1">Catchment</oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col2">Baseflow (years)</oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col3">High flow (years)</oasis:entry>
       </oasis:row>
       <oasis:row>
         <oasis:entry colname="col1">Ovens<inline-formula><mml:math id="M23" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col2">9–30</oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col3">4–10</oasis:entry>
       </oasis:row>
       <oasis:row>
         <oasis:entry colname="col1">Yarra<inline-formula><mml:math id="M24" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col2">20–50</oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col3">13–37</oasis:entry>
       </oasis:row>
       <oasis:row>
         <oasis:entry colname="col1">LaTrobe<inline-formula><mml:math id="M25" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col2">18-41</oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col3">7–19</oasis:entry>
       </oasis:row>
       <oasis:row>
         <oasis:entry colname="col1">Gellibrand<inline-formula><mml:math id="M26" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col2">14– <inline-formula><mml:math id="M27" display="inline"><mml:mi mathvariant="italic">&gt;</mml:mi></mml:math></inline-formula> 100</oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col3">7–20</oasis:entry>
       </oasis:row>
       <oasis:row>
         <oasis:entry colname="col1">Deep Creek<inline-formula><mml:math id="M28" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col2">2–6</oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col3"><inline-formula><mml:math id="M29" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi mathvariant="italic">&lt;</mml:mi><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>–38</oasis:entry>
       </oasis:row>
       <oasis:row>
         <oasis:entry colname="col1">Lyrebird<inline-formula><mml:math id="M30" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col2">45–50</oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col3">9–10</oasis:entry>
       </oasis:row>
       <oasis:row>
         <oasis:entry colname="col1">Teviot Brook<inline-formula><mml:math id="M31" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col2"><inline-formula><mml:math id="M32" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">17</mml:mn><mml:mo>±</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">6</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
         <oasis:entry colname="col3"><inline-formula><mml:math id="M33" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">38</mml:mn><mml:mo>±</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">15</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula></oasis:entry>
       </oasis:row>
     </oasis:tbody>
   </oasis:tgroup></oasis:table><table-wrap-foot><p id="d1e417"><inline-formula><mml:math id="M21" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula> Cartwright et al. (2020). <inline-formula><mml:math id="M22" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula> Duvert et al. (2016).</p></table-wrap-foot></table-wrap>

      <p id="d1e641">The figures also show the reductions in <inline-formula><mml:math id="M34" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H activities of the rainfall
due to radioactive decay from the rain date to 2020 (curves marked “decayed
to 2020”). Due to radioactive decay, the present-day <inline-formula><mml:math id="M35" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H activities of
older water are lower than current rainfall except when they are affected by
bomb tritium, which peaked in the 1960s. However, water present in a stream or spring will have a wide spread of ages due to mixing during flow in the
soil and country rock. This mixing is simulated here by using the
exponential piston flow lumped parameter model (EPM) with an exponential
fraction <inline-formula><mml:math id="M36" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi>f</mml:mi><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">0.7</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula> (Maloszewski and Zuber, 1982). The black mixing curves in
Fig. 1a–c show the variations in <inline-formula><mml:math id="M37" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H expected for samples collected in
2000, 2020, and 2030, with the MTT represented by the year (e.g. a 2020 sample <inline-formula><mml:math id="M38" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H result yielding MTT <inline-formula><mml:math id="M39" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">10</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula> years is plotted at 2010). The EPM(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M40" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi>f</mml:mi><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">0.7</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>) model is chosen here as a realistic mid-range estimate between the
model with no mixing, EPM(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M41" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi>f</mml:mi><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">0</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>), also called the piston flow model that would produce the radioactively decayed curves in Fig. 1, and the fully mixed model, EPM(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M42" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi>f</mml:mi><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">1</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>), also called the exponential model. Figure 1d compares the flow-weighted cumulative stream distribution from Fig. 7c of
Rodriguez et al. (Weierbach) with cumulative EPM curves; the EPM(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M43" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi>f</mml:mi><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">0.7</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>) curve is quite similar to the Weierbach curve. Other lumped parameter models
such as the gamma (GM) or dispersion (DM) models could also have been used;
the GM(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M44" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi mathvariant="italic">α</mml:mi><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>) and DM(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M45" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:msub><mml:mi>D</mml:mi><mml:mi mathvariant="normal">P</mml:mi></mml:msub><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">0.22</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>) models produce distributions
that are closely equivalent to the EPM(<inline-formula><mml:math id="M46" display="inline"><mml:mrow><mml:mi>f</mml:mi><mml:mo>=</mml:mo><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">0.7</mml:mn></mml:mrow></mml:math></inline-formula>) curve (Stewart et al.,
2017). Cartwright et al. (2018) also showed that numerical models that
include dispersion yield similar curves; such models are independent of the
lumped parameter model approach.</p>
      <p id="d1e791">The EPM curves for Trier (Fig. 1a) are relatively flat because of the combined effects of radioactive decay and mixing, but the rising trend with
MTT in the 2000 curve is gradually changing to a falling trend with MTT in
the 2030 curve.<?pagebreak page6335?> At present (2020), water with an MTT of 0 years has a mean
tritium activity of about 8.2 TU (tritium units), and this falls gradually to 5.5 TU for water with an MTT of 10 years. Water with greater MTTs then has slightly increased tritium activities with a maximum of 7.1 TU for water with MTTs of
50–60 years due to the presence of remnant bomb water with higher tritium activities. This means that there is a capacity for detecting water with
MTTs of 0–10 years because of the difference in <inline-formula><mml:math id="M47" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H activities of up to
2.7 TU, but water with longer MTTs will not be distinguishable from younger
water with tritium at present. The precipitation record also shows a
significant seasonal variation (approximately 8 TU peak to peak) due to leak of tritium from the stratosphere each spring. This was not previously used for dating until Visser et al. (2019) and Rodriguez et al. (2021); however, the fact that this variation is seasonal and considerably larger
than the long-term variation expected from the mixing model suggests that
tritium will give results similar to those from the stable isotope seasonal
variations but with a small bias towards longer MTTs because of the small decrease in tritium activity between waters with MTTs of 0 and 10 years (in
2020) due to radioactive decay.</p>
      <p id="d1e803">Another study that determined the TTD using tritium measurements via the
method of StorAge Selection functions was that of Visser et al. (2019) on the southern Sierra Nevada on the western coast of the United States. They also applied the method to <inline-formula><mml:math id="M48" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">18</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>O, <inline-formula><mml:math id="M49" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">35</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>S, and <inline-formula><mml:math id="M50" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">22</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>Na. Their reconstructed tritium input (their Fig. S4.1, represented here by the Oregon record, Fig. 1b) shows the high NH bomb peak similar to the Trier input in Fig. 1a, but
tritium concentrations in rainfall fell more rapidly after the tritium bomb
pulse because of the influence of moisture from the Pacific Ocean (as shown
by Michel, 2006, and Stewart et al., 2012). Visser et al. found that
tritium in precipitation was flat from 2000 to 2020 and therefore that radioactively decayed tritium reached its lowest level in 2000 before rising
because of the high NH bomb pulse at greater MTTs. This means that tritium
can be used more effectively at present for identifying older water (with
MTTs up to 20 years) in the southern Sierra Nevada and on the western coast of the United States than in western Europe, but the 1960s bomb pulse is a problem for both. However, perhaps 86 % of catchments contain water with MTTs less
than 20 years (see the estimate below from Stewart et al., 2010). The reconstructed southern Sierra Nevada record also has a substantial seasonal
variation of 9.5 TU peak to peak.</p>
      <p id="d1e833">In summary, tritium concentrations currently have limited capacity to reveal
old waters in NH catchments compared to the SH because of the presence of the remnant bomb tritium pulse from the 1960s. In 2000, tritium was even less conclusive as an age tracer in streams (Fig. 1). This is about when
high-frequency stable isotope studies became accessible and were applied in NH high-precipitation, low-ET catchments. The collective understanding of
watershed response times may have been influenced by the availability of
such data<?pagebreak page6336?> during these decades. It is still difficult to see older water
using <inline-formula><mml:math id="M51" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H now (especially when only short periods of measurements are
available); however, post-bomb pulse conditions are considerably different in different parts of the NH (as shown by the different shapes of the
tritium input functions for Trier and Oregon). The situation is gradually
improving because bomb tritium is decaying and becoming further away in
time. Samples collected now will be valuable in combination with samples
collected in the future, but relatively long series (up to a decade) may be necessary. The 2030 EPM curve for Trier (Fig. 1a) shows the behaviour that
would be expected for samples collected in 2030 for central western Europe. <inline-formula><mml:math id="M52" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H activities would decrease from 8.2 to 3.8 TU for water with MTTs up
to 20 years, but then the curve would be flat at 3.8 TU for longer MTTs.
This will give better potential for identifying water with MTTs up to 20
years however. For Oregon, the 2030 curve will be falling monotonically with
MTT, which will give good potential for dating.</p>
      <p id="d1e854">In contrast, for waters collected in 2020 in Kaitoke in the SH (Fig. 1c), there is a simple decline in <inline-formula><mml:math id="M53" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H activities with MTT (from 1.9 TU at 0
years to 0.46 TU at 60 years), and the decrease continues to higher MTTs (not shown). This means that the determination of water TTs is only limited by
analytical techniques (and is conservatively 100 years). The precipitation
record also shows a seasonal variation of 1 TU peak to peak, which affects the EPM model curve at young MTTs and can in principle be used to determine young MTTs by the smoothing effect as with stable isotopes. Figure 1c also
shows the 2000 EPM model curve, which was almost flat after an initial drop,
and the 2030 EPM model curve, which will be a steeper version of the 2020
curve.</p>
</sec>
<sec id="Ch1.S4">
  <label>4</label><?xmltex \opttitle{Evidence that ${}^{{{3}}}$H TTDs can be different from
${}^{{{2}}}$H TTDs}?><title>Evidence that <inline-formula><mml:math id="M54" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H TTDs can be different from
<inline-formula><mml:math id="M55" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H TTDs</title>
      <p id="d1e893">After the bomb tritium pulse in the 1960s, NH precipitation became enriched
with tritium, which could be in principle, and in fact was, effectively traced through hydrological systems (Fig. 1a). Tritium studies from this
period (1960–1990) showed that the TTDs of catchments covered a wide range
of values (cited in Stewart et al., 2010). Estimated MTTs ranged from less
than 1 year to decades (e.g. of the catchments listed in Stewart et al. (2010), 45 % had tritium MTTs of 0–5 years, 41 % had MTTs of 5–20 years, and 14 % had MTTs greater than 20 years). Because MTTs deduced from stable
isotope/chloride measurements are based on short-term (seasonal) variations
which are partially or fully attenuated after about 5 years depending on the mixing model applied, MTTs greater than about 5 years are more
difficult to substantiate (Stewart et al., 2010). If the MTTs were in fact
longer than 5 years, they would nevertheless tend to look like about 5 years with stable isotopes depending on the model applied. So, a large
fraction of the catchments (up to 55 %) would be expected to have had
different MTTs when evaluated with tritium or with stable isotopes. This was
supported by the study of Seeger and Weiler (2014), who analysed stable isotope data on 24 mesoscale Swiss catchments. They stated that “Given a
sufficiently high measurement frequency, stable water isotope data should be
suited to characterise the short term and intermediate part of a catchment's
TTD, but it certainly does not contain enough information to determine
complete TTDs or actual MTTs of a catchment.”</p>
      <p id="d1e896">The SH reached the stage of having problems with interpretation of tritium
synchronously with the NH, but the problem began to decrease much sooner in
the SH (about 1990; see Fig. 1c) because of the ca. 100 times smaller bomb pulse in the SH. The current situation allows for the effective use of tritium for estimating TTDs in SH catchments, and the environment continues to become more favourable for the use of tritium.</p>
      <p id="d1e899">A recent summary of tritium results from Australian catchments illustrates
the capacity of tritium to identify old water in SH catchments (Table 1,
Cartwright et al., 2020; Duvert et al., 2016). These MTTs are much longer
than could be estimated by stable isotopes, so they show that truncation is
very much an issue. The measurements cover both baseflow and high-flow conditions (e.g. the Ovens Catchment measurements spanned Q8 to Q85 flows and the LaTrobe and Gellibrand measurements Q10 to Q95 flows), implying that
the truncation issue applies to both baseflow and high flows.</p>
      <p id="d1e903">Rodriguez et al. (2021) have suggested that the differences between tritium
and stable isotope MTTs in the literature could be attributed to
methodological problems with the use and interpretation of tritium.
Methodological problems they identified included the following.
<list list-type="order"><list-item>
      <p id="d1e908">Sampling differences in streams – tritium concentrations have typically been determined at far less frequency and flow diversity (often only at baseflow)
than stable isotopes, whereas stable isotope studies are becoming
increasingly intensive and average over the full range of streamflows.
However, that is usually not the case for New Zealand tritium studies (e.g.
Morgenstern et al., 2010, 2015) and the Australian
studies cited above that have estimated MTTs at a range of streamflows.</p></list-item><list-item>
      <p id="d1e912">TTD assumptions – tritium studies have often assumed steady-state TTDs based on analytical expressions, whereas more recent stable isotope studies have
used time-variable TTDs which cannot be expressed analytically. However, a steady-state TTD applied separately to individual tritium samples in a time
sequence can allow the TTD parameters to vary from sample to sample and
therefore can yield a time-variable TTD as demonstrated by Morgenstern et
al. (2010).</p></list-item><list-item>
      <p id="d1e916">Methodology – tritium studies have used simpler mathematical formulations
not involving antecedent rainfall and evapotranspiration, whereas stable
isotope studies are now more commonly incorporating these<?pagebreak page6337?> elements via
StorAge Selection function methods. However, recharge models have been
applied to tritium studies to account for antecedent rainfall and
evapotranspiration (e.g. Stewart et al., 2007; Morgenstern et al., 2010).</p></list-item></list></p>
      <p id="d1e919">While these observations are valid for some tritium studies, they do not
alter the fundamental point that tritium under the right conditions can identify the presence of older water, whereas stable isotopes cannot. Because
tritium decays, the MTT can be indicated by reduction in tritium activity
over time and not just by attenuation of seasonal tracer variability in the
input signal.</p>
      <p id="d1e922">Both stable isotopes and tritium can be affected by aggregation effects, causing them to underestimate the MTT in heterogeneous catchments (Kirchner,
2016; Stewart et al., 2017). The effects will be similar for both if MTT
estimation is based on smoothing of seasonal variations but different if the stable isotope MTT estimation is based on smoothing of a seasonal
variation and the tritium MTT estimation based on radioactive decay. The
latter causes underestimation on a much longer timescale.</p>
</sec>
<sec id="Ch1.S5" sec-type="conclusions">
  <label>5</label><title>Discussion and conclusions</title>
      <p id="d1e934">The situation in both hemispheres has changed in time as bomb pulse tritium
has worked its way through the systems. In the NH, elevated tritium values
were useful for determining TTDs for a few decades past the bomb peak (1960s
to 1980s). Then, as the bomb tritium pulse decayed, single tritium measurements gave unclear and ambiguous MTT results, so that series of
measurements were needed and still are. However, the NH is slowly emerging from this period. In the SH, this ambiguous period was shorter, and tritium is now effective for determining long TTs in catchments. Because estimates of MTTs
can be made from single tritium measurements when bomb tritium is at a low
level (provided the form of the TTD can be reasonably determined), the issue
of time variability is different for <inline-formula><mml:math id="M56" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">3</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H and <inline-formula><mml:math id="M57" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H. Series of measurements are always needed for <inline-formula><mml:math id="M58" display="inline"><mml:msup><mml:mi/><mml:mn mathvariant="normal">2</mml:mn></mml:msup></mml:math></inline-formula>H.</p>
      <p id="d1e964">In addition to the long-term variations of tritium concentrations due to the
bomb tritium pulse and radioactive decay, tritium shows medium-term,
short-term (seasonal), and probably even shorter-term (e.g. between different rainfall events) variations. These are largely unexplored (as pointed out by Rodriguez et al., 2021). The seasonal variations are
increasingly prominent because tritium in precipitation is at background
levels (except where tritium from the local nuclear industry is present). This seasonal and event-scale tritium variation contains the same information as
the variation of stable isotopes. Indeed, Rodriguez et al. (2021) have shown that tritium is as effective as stable isotopes when used to determine TTDs
from seasonal fluctuations. However, we feel that the real strength of
tritium in comparison with stable isotopes is for determining longer TTs in
catchments; at present and for some time into the future in the NH, this
will require widely spaced measurements in time. For this reason, it seems
unreasonable to us to consider only very detailed sampling of tritium on the
scale of stable isotopes over short periods. Instead, our recommendation is that more widely spaced measurements in time are included, covering the full range of flow conditions so that results are not biased to
low flows.</p>
      <p id="d1e967">The difference between the tritium input functions in the NH and SH with
regard to remnant bomb tritium in hydrological systems suggests that it
would be valuable to carry out a study like that of Rodriguez et al. (2021)
(or Visser et al., 2019) in the SH to test the comparative merits of tritium
and stable isotopes for identifying the full range of travel times in
catchments. Would stable isotopes show the full extent of the long tail in
comparison with tritium as asserted by Rodriguez et al. (2021) or would
tritium show a “heavier” long tail as asserted here?</p>
</sec>

      
      </body>
    <back><notes notes-type="dataavailability"><title>Data availability</title>

      <p id="d1e974">No new datasets were developed or used in this comment.</p>
  </notes><notes notes-type="authorcontribution"><title>Author contributions</title>

      <p id="d1e980">MKS prepared the first draft after discussion with UM. Substantial
additions and edits were made by IC and UM.</p>
  </notes><notes notes-type="competinginterests"><title>Competing interests</title>

      <p id="d1e986">The contact author has declared that neither they nor their co-authors have any competing interests.</p>
  </notes><notes notes-type="disclaimer"><title>Disclaimer</title>

      <p id="d1e992">Publisher's note: Copernicus Publications remains neutral with regard to jurisdictional claims in published maps and institutional affiliations.</p>
  </notes><notes notes-type="financialsupport"><title>Financial support</title>

      <p id="d1e998">Funding was provided by the Strategic Science Investment Fund from the New Zealand Ministry of Business, Innovation and Employment to GNS Science (C05X1702).</p>
  </notes><notes notes-type="reviewstatement"><title>Review statement</title>

      <p id="d1e1004">This paper was edited by Mariano Moreno de las Heras and reviewed by Francesc Gallart and one anonymous referee.</p>
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